one of my songs i wrote only a beginner give me a honest opi
hey guys rate out of 5 stars give me comments also i was lookin for a girl at first didnt think it would be you and when i layed eyes on you you made my heart go wild and i couldnt get over you chorus you made me go insane that smile you gave me i want you baby gosh look what you do to me you dont know how much i love you your perfect for me everything about you is amazing i just wish you would date me but no pitty please babe chorus you made me go insane that smile you gave me i want you baby gosh look what you do to me im always thinkin of you when i see you sad i just want to cheer you up i wish you were happy all the time chorus you made me go insane that smile you gave me i want you baby gosh look what you do to me i only want you to be happy what brings me joy is your laughter and smile your beauty makes me wanna die i would take a bullet for you but dont think im crazy because thats how much i love you! i love you so much chorus you made me go insane that smile you gave me i want you baby gosh look what you do to me

4 stars dude...real good!

4.5 stars! I can see Shirley Manson singing something like this! 8)

yeah dude now all we need is the music

I don't give comment until I hear your song :P

lol the odds of music goin to it is slim to none i would love to write music for other bands as my band died real quick threw in a new lead singner